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2 years 7 months ago

I'd straighten up the tower so it looks more artificial. And I'd add some key light (from the camera) to the guy in the front. And some detail (pebbles, leaves) in the stuff he's standing on that makes it different from the ground in the distance. And maybe tone down the rim light on him. And make more of a gradient in the values on the ground in background, so you can tell it's receding from the viewer. And maybe a staircase leading up, so it reads as a hill.

2 years 7 months ago

Thanks for the tips man!
Gonna copy them to a txt file and keep em on screen