3 years 6 days ago

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3 years 4 days ago

Looks alright. The one thing that I can't look past is comic sans. You gotta choose a different font.

3 years 4 days ago

alright, any fonts in mind?

3 years 4 days ago

There's tons of free "comic" fonts online, or you could just experiment with regular fonts, or just go with handwriting.

3 years 4 days ago

I think it would look a lot nicer if you didn't render anything, I don't really think it matches the style. Also is the brush set to opacity control?

3 years 4 days ago

Also, you don't need to say "TO BE CONTINUED" at the bottom of every page. Although, that would be really funny. You could even start putting it at the bottom of every panel.

Actually, never mind. I totally call that idea for myself.

Anyways, keep it up. I assume you have something interesting planned.

3 years 3 days ago

I don't actually write the story for the panels

thanks for all the tips