1 month 3 weeks ago

Rating: 8.50
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1 month 3 weeks ago

Looks pretty sweet snips, let us know when you are done with it.

1 month 3 weeks ago

The art is good, but the text could use some work. It's a pain in the ass, but it pays off to get the bubbles tight. 9 from me.

1 month 3 weeks ago

I think you had better strips before, I liked them much more.

1 month 3 weeks ago

I like this more.

1 month 3 weeks ago

@Brewin, yeah I'm just really tired of that style, its too tight and stressful to make, and far too time consuming, I also wanted to get away from the animeish look

1 month 3 weeks ago

I think this new style is great. Going to what Ben said, your hand lettering in Belknap is so great snips, have you thought about doing that in this one? I guess for a 24 hour comic hand lettering might be out of the question, though.

1 month 2 weeks ago

that's the only thing, It would be a lot more tedious to hand write an entire story in 1 sitting

1 month 2 weeks ago

I like the pics, but I thought the cigarette was talking for a moment.

1 month 2 weeks ago

It was, I'm trying this progressive new comic thing.

My target audience is children.