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1 month 3 weeks ago


Description: the start of a new project, I'm going to do the same 24 hour comic challenge strabo did, but i just wanted to get the first page off real quick


Strabo

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1 month 3 weeks ago

Looks pretty sweet snips, let us know when you are done with it.

Ben

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1 month 3 weeks ago

The art is good, but the text could use some work. It's a pain in the ass, but it pays off to get the bubbles tight. 9 from me.

brewin

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1 month 3 weeks ago

I think you had better strips before, I liked them much more.

Ben

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1 month 3 weeks ago

I like this more.

citizen snips

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1 month 3 weeks ago

@Brewin, yeah I'm just really tired of that style, its too tight and stressful to make, and far too time consuming, I also wanted to get away from the animeish look

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1 month 3 weeks ago

I think this new style is great. Going to what Ben said, your hand lettering in Belknap is so great snips, have you thought about doing that in this one? I guess for a 24 hour comic hand lettering might be out of the question, though.

citizen snips

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1 month 2 weeks ago

that's the only thing, It would be a lot more tedious to hand write an entire story in 1 sitting

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1 month 2 weeks ago

I like the pics, but I thought the cigarette was talking for a moment.

citizen snips

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1 month 2 weeks ago

It was, I'm trying this progressive new comic thing.

My target audience is children.

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