3 years 6 months ago

Rating: 9.50

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3 years 6 months ago

I like the gag a lot. I think it would hit a lot harder if there were more arms coming in from offscreen in the first one. The reader would be a little confused, but ignore it. That would plant the joke in their subconscious. Then you drop it on them in the last frame.

The characters are cute.

3 years 6 months ago

that idea with the arms is perfect, i think ill how back and edit that in, i think ill also do shading

3 years 6 months ago

Is this just a one off, or are you working on a new regular strip? It's great. I've tried to do comics in the past, but it's really a lot harder than one would think.

3 years 6 months ago

im just kinda taking a little break from the other one, but i think ill do maybe one or two of these a week

its a lot more relaxing to draw, but much harder to write