The things that larvae do is eat-eat-eat, so that's the ting they need steam power for. These are eat-enhancing machines for larva, and a scientist who is timing which device is fastest in devouring a carrot. I am still messing a bit with color, both for the panels and the background.
i think you need more drop shadows and more shading on the scientist
i know youre drawing "simple" characters, but ithink that a lil shading always helps
Dude! this is so damn cool! =) I love the idea!, you make it look so fun and happy! [^ _ ^]
Brewin: it is accepted critiquing etiquette to first acknowledge and highlight the positive factors
of an image from an artist and then aim critical commentary. It's considered rude and uncaring to just
do commentary of betterment and not appreciate the image for what it is or atleast tell the artist what you liked.. =)
http://rahll.deviantart.com/journal/20038129/
The link is a good read for anyone who likes to critique..
This is classic and original, LOVE the slug in the middle with the red nose and mustache!
I'd love to have that job, but yesh, bionic slugs with stainless steal jaws! Coool.
No hard feelings Brewin.
Thank you too Helix, but I can take some critique.
It's good to be clear about critiquing etiquette.
I know who I am and I know when I am satisfied with my work.
I know why I didn't do shading on the scientist guy,
I got sloppy towards the end and wanted to post this thing.
Brewin has a point, that it'll prolly looks better with half a minute more attention on the shading.
Maybe he has high expectancies of me, so that I can take as a compliment.
Ok, some of my stars should goto Ben for the topic,
if it wasn't for his topics, I'd never make a thing like this.
First I had no idea what do with it.
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