3 years 8 months ago

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3 years 8 months ago

Nice one. I like the perspective, the sword handle, and the graffiti onomatopoeia.

3 years 8 months ago

and so concludes chapter 2

3 years 8 months ago

Lookin' good, any blimps in the story? :)

I'd love to see a posting of a chapter so I could follow the story line.
Are you posting all the pages as you go?
Is the whole story up here in postings?
Is tomorrow going to be a good day?

3 years 8 months ago

ive been posting them as i do them, but soon hopefully i'll have a site up for it, where ill post them all at once

3 years 8 months ago

DUDE! Talk about plot device! shame, I hope no one lost any limbs or lives.. =/

I love the way you did the tunnel and the way she grabbed her swords but it was too late.

the perspective is the bomb man, quite literally! =D