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August 5, 2008 + upload a sketch to this topicsuggested by Rubbin

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I need some feedback here, on the new page layout style, and whether you all like it more with shading, or just linework, i can't tell which is better

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once more, enlarge to read clearly if you will

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Dude, day by day your getting better, I'm really impressed with today's one!!
Pretty soon were gonna have to collab! haha! your bombing that page well!,
her body looks good and the line quality rocks my sox!

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thanks a lot, i found a style for this project that im comfortable with, now i should be able to just spit out consitantly good pages, i did a lot of sketches in this style ealier this year, when i find them ill post some

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Yeah like I said before, you are getting better and better with each strip. The new look is great.

All you need to do is plan a little bit better around blurbs. The art is fantastic though.

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Sweet Snips. Thanks man, you make it fun being on DSG, keep it up homes!

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its much better, because you took away the different shades of colors but you left the outline, which is one of your strong points.
plus theres more contrast which gives it a more traditional "comic" style.

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yeah thats pretty much my roots anyway, graffiti outlines, and manga style so im glad i found a happy medium

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Yes! The lines look a lot sharper. May I suggest you still use some shading on the more 'panoramic' views, you seem to have one of those now and then.

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